What is An American?
The Meaning of an
American has changed so much over time. An American once was a hard
working person that worked on the fields or a man that built railroads
or anyone that wanted to reach the American Dream. Now in 2014, the
meaning of an American is so different. technology has changed the
meaning of American. To be exact the SOCIAL MEDIA has changed and molded
a new American.
Technology has gone so far and now the
media has so much power. Even the American Dream has changed. It use to
be about hard work and good economical stand. It was about honest and
love for your family. I speak on the American Dream, because its the
foundation of America and of the American. An American is based of the
dream. Change the Dream, Change the American.
So what is an
America? That's easy. Just look at the main points that the media
pushes on to you and into your brain. I have just a few of the points
that they keep pushing and pressing on. 1. Its to believe all and
everything your government tells you. you have to be patriotic beyond
belief. 2. they want you to be the perfect puppet. they what you to act
like they want you to, like who they want you to, and buy want they want
you too. which leads to my last point. 3. being the perfect consumer.
they want all your money and what better why to get it the by
advertizing what they want you to buy. which is the reason almost
everyone wears the same types of socks, shoes, hats, shirts, etc. and
that's what an American is today
Great description I really enjoyed reading it
ReplyDeleteYour essay could be improved, many spell and punctuation errors. I also disagree when you say "An American today has evolved due to social media and government influence." An American today is one who takes pride for his country and has a career to support himself and his family.
ReplyDeleteOver all you need to work on the essay. its an ok essay but it needs a lot for work. You have a lot of spelling mistakes and grammar errors. what you should to is explain in better detail how social media is changing the American public. Use better words, more descriptive and more captivating writing would help your essay be better
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